“When Can You Start?”
Nobody asks a candidate they've ruled out when they can start — so this one is a good sign, and it's the one people fumble. Get a date, one clause of reason, and a close that moves things forward.
Generated for: Retail store manager (5 years, currently employed) interviewing for an operations coordinator role where the seat is already empty
I'm on four weeks' notice, so if we agreed something this week I'd be with you from the 22nd.
I'd want to hand over properly — I've got two people who'd be picking up my area, and I'd rather they weren't dropped in it.
Between now and then I can get the paperwork, references and any checks done straight away, and I'm happy to have a call with whoever's covering the role so I'm not starting cold.
What do the next steps look like at your end?
Why this one works
- A real date, first, in one line. "As soon as possible" and "whenever you need" both sound accommodating and answer nothing — they just make the interviewer ask a second question to get the thing they already asked for.
- The notice is stated as an ordinary fact, not apologised for and not offered up for breaking. Offering to walk out on four weeks reads as enthusiasm to the candidate and as a preview to the person hearing it, who is the next employer in that story.
- One clause on the handover does the integrity work without a speech about integrity. A candidate who explains their own decency at length sounds like they're auditioning for it.
- The paperwork-and-a-call offer closes the gap, which is what the employer is actually worried about when a seat is already empty. It turns a four-week wait into a four-week runway at no cost.
- It ends by handing the next move back rather than trailing off — and it never opens a salary conversation, which doesn't exist yet because no offer does.
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